I'm toying with the idea of occasionally using the last line from the previous week's story to start the next week. What do you think? Maybe for a month at a time, if the story is rolling well?
Tuesday, March 31
Better late than never
So I'm finally remembering to post the completed Tandem Story. I also missed photo Friday last week, so whatever, I'm a slacker. Don't forget...we're starting a while new tandem story tomorrow, so be sure to come back and play!
"D o not enter," the sign clearly said, which didn't really matter since they were all blind. Not that a "do not enter" sign would have deterred them from their mission: which was to find the buried treasure rumored to be left in the old abandoned mine by Peg Legged Smitty. Even though they didn't like him much, they brought along Edgar; because as they say, in the land of the blind, the one-eyed man is king. Plus, he was the only one willing to go into the mine first and make sure it was stable enough for the rest of them. Edgar poked along cautiously. How in the heck did he get pushed into these madcap adventures? For a measly chocolate cheesecake?! He didn't really believe in buried treasure, but he'd go into the mine for a cheesecake treat afterwards. Sandy made the best cheesecake ever! The others in the group weren't sure why Edgar had been willing to take this risk for cheesecake when there was buried treasure at stake, but they were willing to go with it. Edgar had never really been that smart. Edgar inched along, tapping the rotting wood bracing here and there. He was just about to go back for the others when he heard a low creaking sound. Terrified, he peered through his thick lenses into the fog. Inching forward, he finally bumped into a ghostly empty swing, swaying gently despite the lack of wind. Through the fog came an eerie wailing sound, like a child crying for its mother, only creepier.
I'm toying with the idea of occasionally using the last line from the previous week's story to start the next week. What do you think? Maybe for a month at a time, if the story is rolling well?
I'm toying with the idea of occasionally using the last line from the previous week's story to start the next week. What do you think? Maybe for a month at a time, if the story is rolling well?
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